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   교정강사   Ernest(C)    등록일   2021-07-16
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  [HOMEWORK] A. Write a sentence using the word "discover". Discover means find or experience new thing. But, it is dangerous. B. Make these sentences into English. -안녕, 돌돌아. Hi Doldol. -누구야? Who is it? -그녀는 내 친구 심순이야. She is my friend Simsoon.
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[HOMEWORK]

A. Write a sentence using the word "discover".

 Discover means find or experience new thing. But, it is dangerous. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Discover means find or experience new thing but sometimes it is dangerous.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-안녕, 돌돌아.

 Hi Doldol.  

 

-누구야?

 Who is it? => Corrected vocabulary.

​Who's she?

 

-그녀는 내 친구 심순이야.

 She is my friend, Simsoon. 


Wow! Good work, Ryan! See you in class ^^​