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   제 목   When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-07-17
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  A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why? I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/09/21) -추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요? Does additional fee enable me to get priority? -적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다. Let's look for an appropriate insurer. -우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다 I would like our products to be insured.
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A.) If When is or was the happiest time of your life? Why?

 

I  would  be the happiest when my elder daughter was burn.

 

=> I would be the happiest when my elder daughter was born.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/09/21)

 

-추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요?

Does additional fee  enable me to get priority?

 

OR 

=> Could we ask for preferential treatment in return for extra payment?

-적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다.

Let's look for an appropriate insurer.

 

OR 

=> Let's find an appropriate insurance company.

 

-우리 제품이 보험에 가입되어 있었으면 합니다

I would like our products to be insured.

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• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.