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   교정강사   Vanessa(D)    등록일   2021-08-25
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  Today is rainy hard. Now too. I don't like rain but today is good. It's dark. How are you teacher? It's look so sunny in the morning but it's dark in evening. Everything is good. I think tomorrow won't rainy it's sunny. Good night teacher. Bye bye (●'◡'●)
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It's raining very hard today. I don't like it when it rains but today was great!

How are you, teacher? It's sunny in the morning and dark in evening. Everything is good!

I think it will be sunny tomorrow and it won't rain.

Good night, teacher. Bye-bye!

 

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Good night, Serim! Thank you for listening today. See you tomorrow!

Sleep well, Serim! ^^