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   교정강사   Arah(C)    등록일   2021-10-14
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  A. What advice from your parents do you always follow? My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. So, since I started to work, I have kept that in mind. Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. What I did before was not a big thing. But, I believe small changes make a big result. I live every day. And I work, study and love every day. Some day, later when I am the same age of my mom, I think I will appreciate with her.
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A. What advice from your parents do you always follow?

My mom always says that working hard and steadily is so important. 

She also tells me giving up easily is like a poison. 

So, since I started working to work, I have kept that in mind. ​

Even if doing something steadily was really hard especially when I was little, she admired me for not giving up. 

What I did before was not a big thing. ​​

But, I believe small changes make a big result. 

I live every day. 

And I work, study and love every day. 

Some day, later when I am at the same age of as my mom, I think I will appreciate with her. ​

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.