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   교정강사   Jeniffer(C)    등록일   2021-04-21
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  A. Which country is the best place to study English? I think England is a suitable country to study English. Once I want to study in another country, I have to live conveniently. In that sense, England is somehow modern and quiet.So I can concentrate on studying English calmly.(Even if the food isn't tasty...) B. Make these sentences into English. -성격을 고치기로 결심했다. I decided to fix my characteristic. -그 질문에 답할 수 있는 기회를 주세요. Give me an oppurtunity to answer that question. -그 뉴스를 들은 그는 눈물을 흘렸다. He shed tears when he heard the news.
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A. Which country is the best place to study English?

I think England is a suitable country to study English. Once, I want to study in another country I have to live conveniently. In that sense, England is somehow modern and quiet. So I can concentrate on studying English calmly.(Even if the food isn't tasty...)

B. Make these sentences into English.

-성격을 고치기로 결심했다.

I decided to fix my characteristic. ---> I decided to change my character.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-그 질문에 답할 수 있는 기회를 주세요.

Give me an oppurtunityopportunity to answer that question. ---> Give me a chance to answer the question.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-그 뉴스를 들은 그는 눈물을 흘렸다.

He shed tears when he heard the news. ---> The news brought tears to his eyes.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.