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   제 목   Today is Nov. 23th, Tuesday.(Actually I load this on 24th, Wed.)    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-11-24
   작성내용
  A. Make sentences for each word: SPACE / PLANET / ROCKET The space is so big that we can't know exactly. Earth is one of planet. Rocket is very big and fast. B. Make these sentences into English. (11/23/21) -다른 필요한 건 없으세요? Anything else? -먼저 물 주세요. Would you like to bring some water first? -알겠습니다, 부인. Okay, ma'am.
   교정내용
 

A. Make sentences for each word: SPACE / PLANET / ROCKET

The space is so big that we can't know exactly. ✔

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Earth is one of planet.

Corrected: Earth is one of the planets. ​( The sentence is corrected grammatically)

 

Rocket is very big and fast. ✔

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B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/23/21)

-다른 필요한 건 없으세요?

Anything else? ✔

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-먼저 물 주세요.

Would you like to bring some water first?

Corrected: Can I get some water, first? 

 

-알겠습니다, 부인.

Okay, ma'am.​  ✔

Great job Tae Gyu!.. Thank you for doing your homework.. ^=^

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