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   교정강사   Ann(D)    등록일   2021-11-25
   작성내용
  I think friendship is kindness. Because in this story, a pixie named Jassy, was small enough to escape from the trap. However, she staged with Geronimo trying to find a way to get out. And Thea brought Geronimo's favoritest icecream for him to thank him about being a guide. I think their're very nice. I will be like them to!
   교정내용
  You're grammar is great but there are some point that we need to practice well. You're summary gives the full idea of the story. Keep up the good work. Good job!