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   교정강사   Jenel(C)    등록일   2021-04-28
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  What is your best piece of advice to study English. I think it is very important to have fun at study English. We improve our skills the fastest when we enjoy something. -넌 어떻게 먹고 사니? What do you do for a living? -아내가 임신했어요. My wife got pregnant. -나는 그가 약속을 지키지 않아서 화가 났다. I was mad that he didn't keep promise.
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I think it is very important to have fun at study English.  →  I think it is very important to have fun when you study English.

We improve our skills the fastest when we enjoy something.   →  We improve our skills the fastest when we enjoy doing something.

 

 

-넌 어떻게 먹고 사니?

What do you do for a living?   →How do you make a living?

=> Another way: Your sentence is correct and this is another way of saying it.

-아내가 임신했어요.

My wife got pregnant. ​​ My wife is having a baby.

=> Another way: Your sentence is correct and this is another way of saying it.

 

-나는 그가 약속을 지키지 않아서 화가 났다.

I was mad that he didn't keep promise.​ ​​​She was upset because he didn't keep his promise.