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   제 목   What are the reasons for low fertility rate?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-02-10
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  A.) What are the reasons for low fertility rate? Please elaborate your answer. The low fertility rate could be ascribed mainly to the low marriage rate. The low marriage rate could result from heavy burden of soaring living expense and childrearing. B.) Make these sentences into English. ((02/09/22) -신선한 커피 냄새가 나. It smells fresh coffee. -휘핑 크림 없이 주세요. Let me have it without whipping cream. -얼음은 빼주실래요? Could you remove the ice?
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A.) What are the reasons for low fertility rate? Please elaborate your answer.

 

 The low fertility rate could be ascribed mainly to the low marriage rate.

 The low marriage rate could result from heavy burden of soaring living expense and childrearing.

 

=>  The low fertility rate could be ascribed mainly to the low marriage rate.

 The low marriage rate could result from the heavy burden of soaring living expenses and child rearing.​ (two words)


B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

((02/09/22)

 

-신선한 커피 냄새가 나.

 It smells fresh coffee.

=> It smells like fresh coffee.

 

-휘핑 크림 없이 주세요.

 Let me have it without whipping cream. 

-얼음은 빼주실래요?

 Could you remove the ice?  

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> Could you take out some of the ice?


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.