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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-03-26
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  How do you feel when you reach your goals I would be excited for my success. I was very happy that my daughter passed the enterance exam of university. Here is a different thing. I go to the table tennis club everyday and I play it with the club members. When one is good at playing, I am very jealous of her. Actually I wish I could be a better player. As of now, my goal is to become a good table tennis player. If I reach the goal, I would be so happy. Well, I think that I have a goal now. Table tennis is a good hobby for my health and emotional thing. (03/24/21) -조선일보를 구독하고 있습니다. -I subscribe Chosunilbo. -전 밤에 운전하는 것에 익숙합니다. -I am used to drive a car at night. -세탁기가 또 말썽을 부리네요. -There is a problem with the washing machine again.
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How do you feel when you reach your goals?

 

I would be excited for my success. I was very happy when my daughter passed the university entrance exam. Here is a different thing. I go to the table tennis club every day and play it with the club members. When one is good at playing, I get jealous of her. Actually, I wish I could be a better player. As of now, my goal is to become a good table tennis player. If I reach my goal, I will be so happy. Well, I think that I have a goal now. Now. Table tennis is a good hobby for my health and mental welfare.  

(03/24/21)

-조선일보를 구독하고 있습니다.

-I subscribe Chosunilbo. ---> I subscribe to the Cho-sun newspaper.


-전 밤에 운전하는 것에 익숙합니다.

-I am used to drive a car at night.--> I'm used to driving a car at night.


-세탁기가 또 말썽을 부리네요.

-There is a problem with the washing machine again. --> The washing machine is acting up again.

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.