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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-05-12
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  A. Why do you think people drink? Because alcohol can make people happy. Actually It makes them feel happy when they're drunk. Maybe they want to get drunk and get out of real world for a while. B. Make these sentences into English. (05/12/22) -고마워. 나는 디저트로과일이 있어. -우와, 복숭아네. -복숭아 맛있어 보인다.너랑 점심을 바꿔 먹을게. -Thank you. I have a fruits for dessert. -Wow, There is a peach. -The peach looks delicious. I will exchange my lunch with you.
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A. Why do you think people drink?

Because alcohol can make people happy. Actually It makes them feel happy when they're drunk. Maybe they want to get drunk and get out of real world for a while.

--> It's because alcohol can make people happy. Actually, when they're drunk, they feel happy. Maybe, they want to get drunk and get out of the real world for a while.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/12/22)

 

-고마워. 나는 디저트로과일이 있어.

-우와, 복숭아네.

-복숭아 맛있어 보인다.너랑 점심을 바꿔 먹을게.

-Thank you. I have a fruits for dessert. --> Thanks. I have some fruits for dessert.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-Wow, There is a peach. (Correct)

-The peach looks delicious. I will exchange my lunch with you. (Correct)​​