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   제 목   5/24 homework <J>    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-05-24
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  {HOMEWORK} A.) What can you say about mind games? Are they really helpful? Please elaborate on your answer. Mind game is a game using brain. Like puzzles. I think it`s helpful. Because when I play mind games, I`m become to smart. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/24/22) -“나에게 사탕을 주세요. 그렇지 않으면 당신을 괴롭힐 거예요” 라는 뜻이야. = It means ''Give me some candy.. If not, I`ll bother you.'' -그거 재미있다. = That`s fun. -트릭 오어 트릿! = Trick or treat! To teacher Colleen. It`s homework that I forgot in last Thursday. I want rest in big hotel with pool in Jeju island.
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{HOMEWORK}                                                                                                                                                   

A.) What can you say about mind games? Are they really helpful? Please elaborate on your answer.

Mind game is a game using brain. Like puzzles. I think it`s helpful. Because when I play mind games, I`m become to smart.

 

=>  A mind game is a game using the brain. Like puzzles. I think it`s helpful. Because when I play mind games, I become too smart.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/24/22)

 

-“나에게 사탕을 주세요. 그렇지 않으면 당신을 괴롭힐 거예요” 라는 뜻이야. = It means ''Give me some candy.. If not, I`ll bother you.''

=>  It means "Give me some candies or we'll bother you."


-그거 재미있다. = That`s fun.  

-트릭 오어 트릿! = Trick or treat!  

 

To teacher Colleen. It`s homework that I forgot in last Thursday.

I want rest in big hotel with pool in Jeju island.

=> ​ I want to take a rest in a big hotel with a pool in Jeju island.​


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.