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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-14
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  It's 2 year anniversary since we moved into this apartment. Time flies. As I told you, we will go to the Japanese restaurant in the evening. It was my husband's birthday last Saturday. We didn't make a reservation so we couldn't have food in that resturant. I booked the room for us yesterday. We will celebrate my husband's birthday and the anniversary at the same time. I'll buy a chocolate cake which my daughter likes on the way to come back home from that restaurant. It will be for the anniversary, so I'll ask 2 candles to the clerk in the bakery. This apartment has a park connected to the small mountain. The air is clean and the neighborhood is fairy quiet. I live in Seoul and I can hear frogs singing at night from the pond in the park just like I live in countryside. I am lucky. Bye
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It has been two years since we moved into this apartment. Time flies so fast. As I told you, we will go to the Japanese restaurant in the evening. It was my husband's birthday last Saturday. We didn't make a reservation so we couldn't have /eat food in that restaurant. I booked the room for us yesterday. We will celebrate my husband's birthday and the anniversary at the same time. I'll buy a chocolate cake which my daughter likes so much on the way home. It will be for the anniversary, so I'll ask 2 candles to the clerk in the bakery. This apartment has a park connected to the small mountain. The air is clean and the neighborhood is fairly quiet. I live in Seoul and I can hear frogs singing at night in the pond at the park. I feel like I live in a countryside. I am lucky. Bye